I mean when I think about it, who has a home this big by the age of 22?
Let alone come from another country and learn everything on his own.
Although it can be anyone, those are the three people that have influenced me to do better in my life more than anyone else has.
My mother, my brother, and a few other people in my life have also made a good difference.
Be sure to read Max's essay on an influential person.
Max writes about a rather unremarkable junior high kid he encountered while teaching summer camp.
It's not unusual for a college admissions essay to talk about a person who played an important role in your development.
Whether this is a parent, a friend, a coach, or a teacher, such essays can be powerful if they avoid common pitfalls.
He did this all by himself and even though he says it was hard, he never gave up.
My father is about to turn 50 years old in a few months and till this day he is a hardworking man.